Rewriting your book after the first draft
Once you have a first draft of your book, it’s time to rewrite it.
Plan to rewrite at least four times before submitting your book to an editor.
The first rewrite will be the deepest and cruelest but also the most necessary one. This is called a structural rewrite. Look at the big picture of the book and ask some serious questions:
What scenes are to stay and which ones are to be deleted?
Are the characters staying true to form throughout the story?
Are they believable, likable, and lovable?
Do the good people have any weaknesses and do the downright nasty, bad folks have any redeemable features?
Does the book flow well? Does it get bogged down in description or in dialogue?
Does the tension build too fast? Too slow?
Are the characters described in one massive word dump or are they gradually introduced through scenes, actions, conversations, and body language?
Step away from your book as the author […]