Is It Brain Surgery?
There’s an anecdote which I’ve heard attributed to a few different famous authors, including Margaret Atwood, though I read somewhere that she says it didn’t originate with her. It goes like this:
A famous writer is at a party. She’s chatting with a brain surgeon. The brain surgeon, upon hearing who she is, gets excited, and says that when he retires he’s going become a writer. The writer quips snidely, “Oh really? When I retire, I’m going to become a brain surgeon.” The author, here, implies that writing should be left to professionals.
Here’s where I think she gets it wrong. Of course there are activities we wouldn’t ever do without years of formal training and professional licensing, like brain surgery, nuclear-reactor design, and fighter jet piloting, because lives depend on our performance. But there are also activities that many of us do as a part of our ordinary lives that don’t carry such risks. We write. We tell stories. We create art. We make music. For these activities, I don’t think it serves us well to draw too hard a line between being a professional and being an amateur, or to assume that we can’t succeed at them as avocations or as second careers.
There’s no shortage of famous writers who had another day job, or who started writing later in life. One of America’s most revered poets, Wallace Steven, spent his days as an insurance executive. Raymond Chandler turned to writing only after losing his job as an oil company executive. Sue Monk Kidd, the author of The Secret Life of Bees, was a writer all her life, but didn’t publish her first book until she was in her fifties. Others notables include Richard Adams, Bram Stoker, Tillie Olson, Laura Ingalls Wilder, and Anthony Burgess.
Here’s where I think the author in the anecdote gets it right. You shouldn’t fool yourself that just because you write for your job, for school, and in your daily life, that being a good writer is any easier than being a good brain surgeon. Achieving mastery in writing can be every bit as difficult and complex as achieving mastery in brain surgery, and usually takes years of dedication and effort whether you are a professional, an amateur, or embarking on it as a second career.
Make Your Writing Easier to Follow
Guest post by Barbara McNichol, a nonfiction book editor and creator of WordTrippers Tips, a fun resource for better writing skills. www.BarbaraMcNichol.com & www.WordTrippers.com
Whether it’s an email, a marketing message, or a chapter in a book, are you sometimes challenged to make your writing easier for your readers to follow? How can you create a smooth flow that guides them with ease and doesn’t leave the impression it’s tedious to read?
Give these five techniques a try:
Use subheads: When you use subheads throughout your piece, readers can skim your content and quickly discern what’s intended to follow. Even more, subheads indicate a change of subject has occurred. In turn, that subhead allows readers to find the related topic quickly. Your guide: new subject, new subhead.
Convey one idea per paragraph: If you pack a paragraph with more than one idea, it creates difficulty following the meaning. In an email about a talk, for example, you might use three separate paragraphs: one explaining the subject of the talk, one explaining who the presenter is, and the third showing the date, time, and place of the event. You can also add subheads to separate each paragraph.
Use bullets points and numbered lists: When you list similar things (such as names, steps, benefits, requirements), you help readers recognize similar content quickly. With lists, you can leave out transitional words that paragraphs command. It aids the understanding when you use the same part of speech (e.g., a verb or a noun) at the beginning of each point. Note: When crafting a list, use numbers when the order of the points matters; otherwise, use bullets.
Vary sentence length: Although short, concise sentences are easy to read, a string short sentences can feel disjointed. You can add interest by varying the length of your sentences. My rule of thumb is keeping sentences shorter than 21 words so readers don’t get bogged down. Instead, they follow your meaning more easily.
Vary sentence structure: Building your sentences in the order of subject-verb-object (active structure) is simple and clear. But if all your sentences are constructed that way (passive structure), it can come across as monotonous. Along with varying your sentence length, remember to break out of the mold (command). Use a combination of commands, passive, and active structure to create variety that keeps readers interested.
Practice these techniques to make your writing easy to follow, and you’ll get better responses from your readers every time.
Tell Me a Story, Friend
This Summer I had the pleasure of seeing three people, who in various ways I connect with through book publishing, tell stories from the stage at storytelling events. For years I’ve been a big fan of The Moth storytelling radio hour and similar podcasts, so it was a real delight to hear people I actually know tell stories from the stage.
The first two storytellers I saw at one of the amazing monthly shows put on by Odyssey Storytelling of Tucson. The theme for the show was Different. Terry Filipowicz, my cohort on the Book and Movie Biz Genre of the Book and Author Committee for the Tucson Festival of Books (wow, that’s a mouthful), Vice President at Great Potential Press, and Instructor at Pima Community College, and Ethel Lee-Miller (etheleemiller.com), Wheatmark author, writing editor and coach, public speaking coach, and workshop leader, both told charming stories about their experiences of being different from others.
(Odyssey Storytelling’s next show is Sept 6, on the theme Branded. Find more information about it at odysseystorytelling.com.)
The third storyteller I saw was Wheatmark’s own project manager extraordinaire and award-winning journalist, Lori Conser, at an event called Coffee with the Authors: Inspirational Writers Read, who told an affecting story about an incident in her life which forced her to examine her conscience and make a change of heart. You can read more of her work on her blog (http://lsellstrom.blogspot.com.)
I enjoy stories whether written or oral, and encourage writers to go to storytelling events, or listen to storytelling podcasts. They are good fun, and can’t help but make writers better at their craft.
Think About Book Marketing: What is Your Annual Book Buying Budget?
Writers . . . you know yourselves, and you know the work and play of creating a manuscript. You know your characters, topics, arcs, themes, word counts, and gerunds. You are the ones wondering who your readers will be, and what you want to know is: who will be the buyers of your book?
Here’s a list of potential customers for your book-as-creative-product:
• Libraries
• Corporations that buy in bulk to distribute to employees or clients
• Parents, on behalf of their children
• People who love to read and have space in their homes for a printed book collection
• People who love donating and/or reselling their printed books
• People in the general population, one-by-one
• Friends and family
• Activists who appreciate going to lectures and meeting authors
Now, here are questions to you from the other side of your desk:
What is your annual book budget?
What do you do with the printed books you purchase?
Many writers spend so much time at their craft (while living lives to generate stories to write about and day-job income), they don’t pay attention to the expenses of their own monthly household budgets—which most likely do not include a column for amounts dedicated to spend on books each month or year.
Is this you, or, do you know to the penny how much you support the work of fellow writers? If you don’t have an exact answer, you’re in the majority. Most people within the down-side-up U of the bell curve don’t pay much attention to their book-buying habits.
How can you as a writer make sense of books as business? A few surveys suggest answers.
One of them, posted in 2018 on www.statista.com, found the percentage of adults who read a book (any format) over a year. The highest percentage of readers, 84 percent, were between the ages of eighteen and twenty-nine. The lowest, 67 percent, were 65 and older. The in-between age groups scored in the low 70 percents.
A 2017 survey (www.bookriot.com) asked how many books people read on average per year. A majority of respondents, 41 percent, reported reading more than fifteen books per year, and in this category, 43 percent were senior citizens! Another recent worldwide survey of internet users in seventeen countries learned that 30 percent of respondents read “every day or most days.” Six percent stated that they never read books.
Reading is good for all components of the human being: body (relaxation), mind (mental stimulation), intellect (learning) and spirit (…just because). Intuition says there are more readers than writers in this world. The publishing business may seem as if it is on shifting sands, but it is built on a firm foundation of creators, seekers, and users.
Readers are important, but writers play all three roles.
Back to your personal yearly budget for buying books. It’s likely you spend between $0–$400 per year on a variety of titles: cookbooks, celebrity tell-alls, true crime, mysteries, how-to manuals, tourist guidebooks, memoirs, science fiction, a novel or two. The cost of individual books range from $2.99 to $10.99 (ebook), $17–$21 (paperbacks), $25–$35 (hardcovers).
Whatever you do with them after you’ve supported another writer and read them is up to you, but the price of no books is a very sad, incomplete life.
Mary Holden is a freelance editor and writer
www.marylholdeneditor.com
Ode to a Peach Tree
There’s nothing quite like the experience of holding your finished book at the end of the publishing process. After writing, waiting for editing, designing, and working through multiple revisions, you’ve got it! Reminds me of a story from my childhood about a peach…
As a kid growing up in Southern California, I looked forward to two things every summer: our annual July trip to Minnesota, and the homegrown peaches that were waiting for us when we returned home in August. Every summer the peach tree that leaned against the fence in my backyard would produce the most juicy, sweet peaches imaginable. My family would get so many of them that my mother spent many hot summer days in the kitchen canning fruit and making jam. I loved that tree.
So when my father decided to try out his tree-trimming skills on my beloved tree one winter, I was horrified. My sister, mother, and I stood helplessly by and protested as he trimmed a little here, a little there, and then a little too much here and there until the entire tree consisted of only the trunk and a few large branches. Don’t get me wrong, I love my dad, but this was a sin approaching the unpardonable. It didn’t surprise any of us the following summer when our poor tree produced no peaches at all. “Take heart,” my dad reassured us. “We’ll have peaches next summer.” And so we waited. But the next summer came and went without any peaches either. And so did the following four summers, until we had given up on ever seeing another peach from that tree again.
And then one fateful August day my aunt and uncle came to visit.
Now my aunt and uncle lived on several acres of land in Northern California, and grew many different kinds of fruit trees, so we told them about our beloved peach tree. Immediately, my uncle headed to the backyard with the rest of us following. He stood at the base of the tree, rubbing his chin and looking up into the branches. Then he said the unthinkable.
“Well, there’s a peach right there!”
Our eyes followed the direction his finger was pointing, and there, almost hidden between branches and leaves, was the largest, most perfect-looking peach any of us had ever seen. My dad hauled the long fruit picker from the garage, raised it up to the peach, and plucked it from the tree. He said it was so ripe it nearly fell into the basket on its own volition. We stood over it, marveling at its size, which rivaled a small cantaloupe. We couldn’t wait to taste it, so we sectioned out six large pieces—one piece for each of us.
And the taste? Well, it was the sweetest, juiciest . . . the absolute best peach any of us had ever eaten!
As far as I know, that was the last peach our tree ever produced. A few years later my sister went away to college, and I followed the year after that. Then my parents moved to a different house. But I’ll never forget the summer of the greatest peach. Was it worth the wait? You betcha!
Publish, Baby, Publish!
Billionaire oil magnate J. Paul Getty quipped: “Formula for success: rise early, work hard, strike oil.” He was, of course, highlighting how important luck is as a component of success. This same sentiment can easily apply to writing and publishing a book, “Formula for success: rise early, write well, and get discovered.” If you try to get published by a major New York publisher, you will soon find, that unless you have published with them before, or are a famous movie star or politician, you have little chance. Even if your book is incredibly well-written and interesting, you, as a first-time author have to somehow get discovered by the right person at the publisher. Without some lucky accident, like a personal or professional connection on the inside who can champion your manuscript, it’s very tough. If you decide to self-publish, luck will also be a factor in your success. (Of course, if you are famous movie star or major politician, luck has already favored you, and your chances of self-publishing success are high.) Otherwise, you and your book still need to get discovered, but, in this case, by readers, which requires both hard work (marketing) and luck.
Discouraged? You shouldn’t be. Achieving success in anything worthwhile requires “hard work,” and always depends to some degree on luck.
You have complete control over the “rise early, work hard” part of the formula. You can study the craft of writing, re-write your book until it is as perfect as you can make it, and work with professional editors and book designers to get an outstanding finished product.
You can even do things to minimize how important luck is to your success. If you want to get discovered by a major New York publisher, you can network with right people in the industry. If you self-publish, you can market directly to the right groups of readers. (Talk to us about Amazon Advertising opportunities.)
You may not have the good fortune to become a world renowned author, but, even if you don’t, the other rewards of writing and publishing are powerful; the sense of achievement, the satisfaction of sharing your message or story, and the authority and credibility that being a publishing author can afford you. I’ve worked with thousands of authors over the years, and rarely have they regretted their decision to publish. They may have regretted that they didn’t have a book edited just one more time, that they decided on a certain cover design, or that they didn’t have enough time and money to do more marketing, but not that they wrote and published.
Finding Inspiration in a Dry Season
I never imagined myself living in the desert. Born and raised in Orange County, California, I believed that my life would always exist within a certain radius. While we experienced our fair share of heat waves, there was some reassurance in the knowledge that the beach was just a short drive away. The cool coastal breeze and marine layer could temporarily relieve any discomfort caused by summer’s warm embrace.
My life trajectory changed drastically when I met my now husband. Committing to a man who owed at least three years to the Air Force meant that we were no longer the masters of our fate, and that fate was destined for Tucson.
We moved to the Old Pueblo in the middle of June 2014, and I was not prepared for the heat. June heat is unrelenting. Cool mornings are replaced with 90 degree wake-up calls that quickly ascend to temperatures of 112 or higher. Plants find themselves near-death if not appropriately tended to, cars are miserable to enter and fair-skinned individuals, like me; become victims of the sun’s unforgiving rays. The cruel heat left me feeling banished from outdoor life, and I felt stuck.
Yet, now having lived here for four years, I have grown accustomed to this weather pattern and now understand the full purpose of June’s misery. The oppressive heat during the month of June is preparing the way for the monsoons to follow. This high-pressure month is necessary for creating the conditions required to bring in the summer storms and provide the water needed for the desert’s rebirth. A short period of suffering leads to sweet relief and opportunity for growth in the end.
I often feel that life is like the weather in the desert. Our lives are filled with seasons of growth, and also seasons that feel dry and stagnant. It is easy to want to stay where life is comfortable because no one enjoys periods of drought or hardship, but dry seasons have their purpose. Without those times where we find ourselves feeling stuck or in a rut, we may never be willing to open ourselves up to change or growth, or be refreshed by a sudden storm of creative thought. Seasons in the proverbial desert often prepare and strengthen us for the future, if we wait and persist.
So, this summer I am choosing to embrace the dry, hot month of June and will await patiently the product of its high pressure, the first summer storm.
Fast-Paced Compelling Work of Fantasy Causes Us to Question Reality
Tucson. AZ – May 31, 2018 – Wheatmark, Inc. is pleased to announce the release of Moodus Noises by Davis L. Temple. This fast-paced, compelling work of fantasy causes you to question modern reality and offers poignant critical commentary on our nation, its history, and the repercussions of what it means to be both an American and a human being.
The violent history of colonialism has plagued the American psyche for centuries. Some ghosts, however, are never laid to rest. When the Pequot Indians, exterminated by the white man in 1637, return to modern-day Connecticut to exact revenge upon the white man and his former allies, the Mohegan Indians, a violent supernatural confrontation erupts.
A beautiful summer’s day in the small village of Moodus is suddenly disrupted when a local man is discovered not only dead, but scalped; two others have been killed by arrows—all with white whales painted on their foreheads. Meanwhile, Sarah Gates and Rob Chapman, precocious teenagers with an eye for mischief, are searching for caves on Cave Mountain when they see something incredulous: a tall Indian carrying a tomahawk and bow and arrow. His face is covered in war paint and his eyes look dead below his Mohawk. Thinking no one will believe them, the youths decide to investigate on their own. But they soon find themselves involved in a war and moral travesty that stretches well beyond the limits of their experience or imagination.
For more information about the book, or to schedule an interview with the author, please call Mindy Burnett at 520-798-0888 x100 or email support@wheatmark.com.
More about this book:
Moodus Noises, ISBN 9781627875974, was released by Wheatmark, Inc. on April 12, 2018. The book has 268 pages and will be sold as a trade paperback for $13.95
About the Publisher:
Wheatmark, Inc., founded in 1999, is a Tucson, Arizona-based publisher of trade titles that are available wherever quality books are sold worldwide. Wheatmark titles can be purchased in paperback, hardcover, or popular ebook formats. For more information, visit https://www.wheatmark.com.
The Young Woman Who Lived in a Book
I remember the first time I went to the library to check out a book. I was six years old and attending a decently small elementary school in California’s San Joaquin Valley. It was the first time our class was allowed into the library outside of our set “story time” with the librarian. It felt like I had been wandering around for hours, I was so consumed. I grabbed Junie B. Jones and the Stupid Smelly Bus off of a shelf and found a quiet corner to read in. My teacher was looking for me as I hid between the shelves to keep reading for as long as I could before having to go back to class.
I was, and to this day am, the reader of my household. Once I have a book in my hands, you won’t be able to pry it out until I hit the back cover. I was 12 years old when it took me approximately 10 hours to finish the third book of the Twilight Series, Eclipse. I had woken up at about five in the morning on Easter Sunday and saw the book in my basket. I immediately ran to grab a blanket from my bed and curled up on the couch with my book light and sped through the novel, only stopping to go to church and eat breakfast with my family. This obsession with continuous reading and curiosity became a normal occurrence throughout my life. I repeated this pattern with books such as A Fault in Our Stars by John Green, various books of the Harry Potter Series (I finished The Deathly Hallows in 13 hours), and Dear John by Nicholas Sparks.
Fast forward to August 8th, 2016, I was sitting on my bedroom floor packing my room up to head down to the University of Arizona. I am loudly singing along to “My Sweet Lord” by George Harrison when I heard a quiet knock on my door. It turns out to be my dad. He looks at me and then glances at my old, dark brown bookshelf that is bulging with my ever-growing collection of books. “You don’t have enough room for all of these in you dorm room, you know that right?” he says. I was devastated. How was I to decide which are my favorites to take with me? Wouldn’t the others be neglected if I left them at home because no one would read them? He sat a box down on the floor and left the room. It took me two and a half days to decrease my collection from 73 to 20, a number that my dad deemed appropriate enough to fit in those shoe-boxes that they call a dorm room.
-Written by Ireland Stevenson, Intern
Detailed Encounters with Native Wildlife in New Book
Tucson, AZ – April 4, 2018 – Wheatmark, Inc., is pleased to announce the release of Our Desert Backyard by Chris Orr Unruh. This book is chalk full of interesting creatures and critters that you could encounter in our desert ecosystem.
The Arizona desert is teeming with wildlife. A plethora of species, including types of mammals, birds, and reptiles, all live much closer to us than we think. Our Desert Backyard helps define and illustrate the many creatures that desert dwellers might encounter so close to home.
Author Chris Unruh records her personal experiences with many of our desert animals while living at the base of the Catalina Mountains in Tucson, Arizona. Some of these instances include interactions with skunks, desert toads, and even bobcats! She also introduces us to desert plants and wildlife conservation here in Arizona. Even lifetime Arizona residents can learn from these short excerpts about the precious life of the desert.
For more information about the book, or to schedule an interview with the author, please call Mindy Burnett at 520-798-0888 x100 or email support@wheatmark.com.
More about This Book:
Our Desert Backyard, ISBN 9781627875868, was released on February 22, 2018. The book has 160 pages and it will be sold as a trade paperback for $14.95.
About the Publisher:
Wheatmark, Inc., founded in 1999, is a Tucson, Arizona-based publisher of trade titles that are available wherever quality books are sold worldwide. Wheatmark titles can be purchased in paperback, hardcover, or popular ebook formats. For more information, visit https://www.wheatmark.com.